P4

www.youtube.com/watch?v=2rrP6dW0Fiw&feature=youtu.be

This is a link to our groups pitch for our slasher horror idea

Positive

Improvements

-Good background story -Story is simple but works well good base for a horror film -The characters were good -Seems very intense -Very feasible and possible to film

-Make the killer more scary -What camera shots are you going to use? -Opening wasn't clear, unvaried shots -Make opening clearer so film is set up -Weapon for killer may not be right. As you want the killer to be inconspicuous -The opening with someone getting burned may be hard to film -The film sticks to most horror conventions could be more original is some way -How would it be filmed? -How are the characters going to be introduced? -Try to make it seem scary - Try to make more original -Move away from stereotype and more original ideas - What is the editing style? -Make more original idea - How would it fit together with the rest of the film - Would need more people to help with camera - Needs clearer opening -More explosions